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Thursday, November 11, 2010
हिंदी कविता: उम्मीद
गुमसुम सी सड़क पर
सूना सा इक मोड़ आएगा
सन्नाटों के शोर में
बंजर रात सिसकती होगी
और चाँद ऊँगली थामे
तुम्हें घर तक छोड़ आएगा
Thanks Anonymous. Honestly, I thought that was my own when I used it. But I would say that Gulzar Sahib is a pro at the most unexpected and unthought-of oxymorons. This one is almost a cliche. It sure is flatterring to be considered inspired by him. :) Thanks.
11 comments:
wow yaar..keep penning...u r wonderful...will wait for the day when your book gets published :)
Will ask for a autographed copy :)
Come on, Madhu. :) Now, thats way too flattering and I do not believe a word of that. ;)
OMG, Smita di, You are such a good writer :)
Thank you Preeti. :)
"... sannaton ka Shor": Very obviously inspired by Gulzar.
Of course that doesn't take away the credit from you in any which way.
Thanks Anonymous. Honestly, I thought that was my own when I used it. But I would say that Gulzar Sahib is a pro at the most unexpected and unthought-of oxymorons. This one is almost a cliche. It sure is flatterring to be considered inspired by him. :) Thanks.
That was nice Smitha. Was hoping to see you at Write Space this time. Keep writing.....
This is absolutely beautiful. Reminded me of Gulzar.
Geetashree
Thanks a lot Geetashree. I love your writing too. :)
Beautiful little poems Smita. Good to read your work as always. And the new look to your blog is really good...simple and elegant.
Shekhar
Thank you, Shekhar Ji. :)
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